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PostSubject: Holy Dragon Slayer :: Starters   Mon Jun 29, 2015 4:51 am



Spell Name: Fortitude
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10 (5)
Type: Strength Buff
Element: Holy
Spell Effect: Tane’s physical strength is greatly reinforced by her magic, granting her the ability to deal 1.5 D-rank worth of damage.
Duration: Sustained
Cooldown: 2 posts


Spell Name: Holy Dragon’s Purifying Rays
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Type: Offensive
Element: Holy
Spell Effect: Tane gathers holy light of great intensity in her hands. Shortly thereafter, she opens her hands (this entire action is unnecessary for the activation of the spell, as it is only for cosmetic purposes), releasing ten homing beams of light, inflicting D-rank worth of damage to the target. This spell can also be used to hit more than one opponent at a time, the total damage  being distributed evenly amongst targets. The beams can also be produced directly from her body. It travels at 5 m/s and has a range of 5 m.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts


Spell Name: Holy Dragon’s Cleansing Roar
Rank: D
Magic Cost: 10
Type: Offensive
Element: Holy
Spell Effect: Tane releases a tornado of holy light from her mouth that is 1 m in width in the beginning, and expands into twice the initial size every 0.5 m and thus at the end of its range would be at 10 m in width. This spell is used to attack the target enemy in order to ‘cleanse’ them. The attack deals D-rank damage to the target. This spell can also take the form of a laser; the trajectory of said laser can be altered, allowing Tane to strike more than one opponent with the total damage distributed evenly amongst targets. The roar is released at the speed of 5 m/s and is able to reach 5 m.
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 posts


Spell Name: Armament of the Holy Dragon
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20
Type: Defensive
Element: Holy
Spell Effect: A layer of holy light appears on Tane’s skin, the coating being able to protect her from B-rank equivalent damage. As her skin is naturally glowing, the presence of this spell will be very subtle. This spell requires her to be stationary when cast.
Duration: Until destroyed
Cooldown: 3 posts


Spell Name: Presence of the Holy Dragon
Rank: C
Magic Cost: 20 (10)
Type: Offensive
Element: Holy
Spell Effect: Tane releases an aura of holy light that will spread over an area that is 10 m in radius, dealing C-rank damage to anyone within this area. The activation of this spell requires only a thought and only dark locations will reveal the presence of this aura. The aura can be blocked or cancelled by a C-rank defensive and offensive spell respectively.
Duration: Sustained
Cooldown: 3 posts

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PostSubject: Re: Holy Dragon Slayer :: Starters   Mon Jun 29, 2015 8:10 am

Heya! I'm going to grade these spells for you. Dragon Slayers fo' lyfe and all that.

Before we begin, please read the magic rules as well as use the template provided via the link below for your spells. Smile Bump when you have made the changes!

http://fairytailunlimited.top-board.com/t4-spell-creation-template

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PostSubject: Re: Holy Dragon Slayer :: Starters   Mon Jun 29, 2015 8:17 am

Bump! Sorry about that.

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PostSubject: Re: Holy Dragon Slayer :: Starters   Mon Jun 29, 2015 8:30 am

Alrighty then.

All Spells: Remove the specifics listings that you have posted, and just assimilate what you have written into the effects. An example for your Roar would would be:

Tane releases a tornado of holy light from her mouth to attack the target enemy in order to ‘cleanse’ them. The attack possesses highly destructive power, causing great damage to the target, being able to destroy and pierce through buildings as well. This spell can also take the form of a laser; the trajectory of said laser can be altered, allowing Tane to strike more than one opponent with the total damage distributed evenly amongst targets. This spell travels 5m/s, to a maximum of 5 meters and deals D Rank damage.

As far as specific spells:

Fortitude: You cannot buff the damage of your spells, sadly. The only things allowed to be buffed are the things listen within the buffing section.

Holy Dragon’s Cleansing Roar: A D Rank spell cannot pierce buildings, as these spells are for those who are still new to their magic (even though you may be a capable practitioner). They're the cheap filler spells that you can use as distractions, etc. They still do damage, just not on that destructive scale. Please also add the size of the roar.

Armament of the Holy Dragon: This is fine, as it's a defensive spell; however, please note that defensive spells of a B, C, and D Ranks are stationary. So please state while this is active you cannot move.

Presence of the Holy Dragon: Please state that this aura can be cancelled prematurely by being struck by a C Rank spell. While buffs cannot be dispelled, sustained offensives can be interrupted.

Holy Dragon’s Purifying Rays: Please state that ALL of the beams must hit in order for D Rank damage to be done, as well as how many there are. Please keep it reasonable.

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PostSubject: Re: Holy Dragon Slayer :: Starters   Mon Jun 29, 2015 9:00 am

Bump!

> Holy Dragon's Purifying Rays: This spell has a homing effect so unless they're blocked, they will hit.

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PostSubject: Re: Holy Dragon Slayer :: Starters   Mon Jun 29, 2015 9:03 am

Alright, looks good!


Kazu tested, Koba approved!

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